If there
were one word to describe Matilda, it would be "round." Almost
everything about Matilda was quite round. From a distance, one could imagine a beach
ball with skinny legs as she wobbled down the street. She would have a
perfectly spherical head if it weren't for her jutting ears. Sporting a puffed
hairstyle that came down to just below her ears, she managed to provide some
cover and held that coiffure since third grade. No one who knew Matilda dared
to mention her rabbit ears twice. Her sharp tongue shot back remarks striking a
bull's-eye, bringing down the poor souls to levels of insecurity that rendered
them speechless.
Matilda's
first line of defense was her mouth. She vomited every thought that came
through her mind without censorship, consideration or hesitation. Needless to
say, Matilda did not have many friends. Actually, she had none. She did not
care. She forged her way through forty years with the conviction that people
who did not appreciate honesty had no place in her life. So she kept company
with the written word. She read everything she could put her hands on and
collected bits of information about almost anything. Matilda was a well-rounded
individual, she thought of herself as knowledgeable and educated.
Her career
choice helped little to improve her social skills. A lab technician in a
fertility clinic, she spent her days alone in the cold sterile environment and
fiddled with tubes and specimens away from patients and coworkers. She went
home to nine cats and a house full of ferns. Matilda bought the house when she
proposed to Thomas, the shy accountant who looked after the clinic's finances.
He was the only man who dared a conversation with her.
Five
months later, Thomas, her Tommy, walked out of that house two weeks before their
wedding day. Matilda did not wonder where he went. She knew for sure he was in
Hell. She sent him there herself the day he yanked the front door open and told
her he could take her criticizing tongue no longer.
"Go
to Hell," she commanded.
Matilda
watched him march out. He started to cross the street but he never made it to
the other side. Her Tommy lay broken in a pool of blood in front of the wheels
of a truck. He did not die. She knew he wished he had. He told her that every
morning when she walked into his hospital room and fussed over his damaged
body, chatting away with one medical fact or another she had read somewhere.
It turned
out; Matilda's Tommy was indeed in Hell. She read that with her own eyes in his
journal, which he foolishly thought he could keep it hidden. Matilda did not
believe in secrets, so she found a way into his locked desk drawer. His
admission did not matter to her one bit. Her Tommy will remain hers forever.
But she found something else in Tommy's journal, something that finally tied
her tongue.
This is a short story in the making. If you would like to
be involved in how the story of Matilda unfolds, send me your ideas about the
following:
- What did Matilda find in his journal?
- What kind of character is Thomas?
Be creative and let's have some fun!
1) In the journal Matilda found the sentence, "Oh my God I'm an idiot for agreeing to marry that woman!"
ReplyDelete2) Thomas is an idiot for agreeing to marry that woman.
Any more questions? :)
Chris
Thomas is an idiot and ...?
Deleteand a domestic abuse victim of course.
DeleteOf course!
DeleteThe day that he had the accident was totally occupied by one only thought- what he can get Matelda as a special wedding gift. of course a total idiot
DeleteI think Matilda is a unsocial person ,half human character who has insensensetive person. . I think she found that Tommy loves her so much inspire of all her negative aspects.
ReplyDeleteHow about Thomas? Any suggestions about his personality?
DeleteThomas is a junkie and his drug is Matilda, his brain is fried, and all he see is Matilda inner sole, which she are unable to sense or see.
ReplyDeleteWe've established that Thomas is an ideot, a domestic abuse survivor, and a junkie. He's made arrangements for a speical wedding gift for Matilda before the fight and accident that took her by surprise.
DeleteAny one wants to venture as to what kind of gift that is?
Watch for episode 2 of Matilda's story based on these suggestions.
I will hold my thoughts and wait for you to surprise me. However, I do not think Thomas is an idiot, more a parasite and a schemer...wedding gift? I doubt it.
ReplyDeleteRiham