Monday, February 10, 2014

Final Words



The following article was published in the Huff Post Books Web Page on 2/10/2014. I found it interesting to concentrate on last lines of books rather than the first sentences, which we tend to cling to. Not in this list, my personal favorite:

“I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth.” 
From Wuthering Heights by Emily Bronte.

Mr. Lockwood’s closing remarks on the state of Heathcliff and Catherine’s final rest is as unforgettable as their love story itself.




21 Amazing Last Lines From Literature That Will Make You Want To Read The Whole Book

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A book's final sentence is the ribbon on a packaged plot, tied neatly and prettily before an author hands her story over to her readers' imaginations for good. It's a last chance for a good first impression.
Some last lines have the power to disrupt the course of an entire story, shaking up our expectations. Others leave us hanging, and still others provide a cathartic sense of closure. A beautiful, or at least effective, final sentence anchors a story in a reader's mind long after the book is finished.
Here are 21 of our favorite last lines in literature:

"So we beat on, boats against the current, borne back ceaselessly into the past."
From The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald
It'd be a glaring omission to not mention Fitzgerald's oft-quoted thesis about the American Dream.









"“Oh, Jake,” Brett said, “we could have had such a damned good time together.” Ahead was a mounted policeman in khaki directing traffic. He raised his baton. The car slowed suddenly pressing Brett against me. “Yes,” I said. “Isn’t it pretty to think so?”
From The Sun Also Rises by Ernest Hemingway
God, is anything more beautifully, simply written than these final lines? We don't think so.





"A sound of clicking heels on the pavement punctured the quiet. Alex snapped open his eyes, and he and Bennie both turned—whirled, really, peering for Sasha in the ashy dark. But it was another girl, young and new to the city, fiddling with her keys."
From A Visit from the Goon Squad by Jennifer Egan
Egan's theme of using music and sounds to convey nostalgia is wrapped up neatly here, and she paints the characters' lives as cyclical, like the playing of a favorite record.



"Go, my book, and help destroy the world as it is."
From Continental Drift by Russell Banks
A fitting conclusion to a book about globalization, and its power to rapidly change the world.









"Then starting home, he walked toward the trees, and under them, leaving behind him the big sky, the whisper of wind voices in the wind-bent wheat."
From In Cold Blood by Truman Capote
Ethereal and evocative, this line nicely wraps up Capote's deeply personal and heart-wrenching story.









“Yes, she thought, laying down her brush in extreme fatigue, I have had my vision.”
From To the Lighthouse by Virginia Woolf
The lines belong to Lily Briscoe, the novel's resident artist, but could just as easily describe the work of art that Woolf has just concluded.









"Whatever we had missed, we possessed together the precious, the incommunicable past."
From My Antonia by Willa Cather
Like Fitzgerald's final lines, Cather's provide a poignant thesis statement.









"But that is another tale, and as I said in the beginning, this is just a story meant to be read in bed in an old house on a rainy night."
From Oh What a Paradise It Seems by John Cheever
That this sentence is the last line from Cheever's last novel makes it even more of a quaint, humble nod to his role as a teller of quiet, suburban stories.









"Tomorrow, I’ll think of some way to get him back. After all, tomorrow is another day."
From Gone With the Wind by Margaret Mitchell
Mitchell's famous last lines are at once heartbreaking and hopeful.









"He loved Big Brother."
From Nineteen Eighty-Four by George Orwell
The definitiveness of this brusque sentence has a blunting effect, highlighting the bleakness of Orwell's predictions.









"Don’t ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you start missing everybody."
From The Catcher in the Rye by J.D. Salinger
Angsty teens everywhere can relate to Holden's desire to quell his heightened emotions.









“'You can trust me,' R.V. said, watching her hand. 'I’m a man of my'"
From The Broom of the System by David Foster Wallace
The last line of DFW's first novel hints at what else he had in store. Ending an entire book in the middle of a sentence is a bold and playful choice.









"Up out of the lampshade, startled by the overhead light, flew a large nocturnal butterfly that began circling the room. The strains of the piano and violin rose up weakly from below."
From The Unbearable Lightness of Being by Milan Kundera
The butterfly motif brings the concept of "lightness" to life; this final vignette captures the mood of the book perfectly.





“The offing was barred by a black bank of clouds, and the tranquil waterway leading to the uttermost ends of the earth flowed sombre under an overcast sky – seemed to lead into the heart of an immense darkness.”
From The Heart of Darkness by Joseph Conrad
Ominous and syntactically exciting, this final line brings Conrad's dark novel full circle.







"Everything we need that is not food or love is here in the tabloid racks. The tales of the supernatural and the extraterrestrial. The miracle vitamins, the cures for cancer, the remedies for obesity. The cults of the famous and the dead."
From White Noise by Don DeLillo
"The cults of the famous and the dead" is such a punchy last line, it could just as well serve as the book's subtitle.





"'Excellently observed,' answered Candide; 'but we must cultivate our garden.'"
From Candide by Voltaire
Here, Voltaire provides his final advice regarding constant philosophizing: sometimes it's more prosperous to do than to contemplate.







"She was seventy-five and she was going to make some changes in her life."
From The Corrections by Jonathan Franzen
We'll take any optimism we can get from curmudgeonly Franzen, regardless of whether or not it's meant in earnest (and in this case, it seems to be).









"In a place far away from anyone or anywhere, I drifted off for a moment."
From The Wind-Up Bird Chronicle by Haruki Murakami
The dreaminess of this entire novel is punctuated with this final sentence, which is more of an ellipses than a stark period.









"As you from crimes would pardoned be,
Let your indulgence set me free."

From The Tempest by William Shakespeare
This is the last we hear from the Bard; it's the final line of his final play, a humble request for applause before he leaves the stage.









"And she comes to you, and she does not speak, and the others do not notice her, and she takes your hand, and you ready yourself to die, eyes open, aware this is all an illusion, a last aroma cast up by the chemical stew that is your brain, which will soon cease to function, and there will be nothing, and you are ready, ready to die well, ready to die like a man, like a woman, like a human, for despite all else you have loved, you have loved your father and your mother and your brother and your sister and your son and yes, your ex-wife, and you have loved the pretty girl, you have been beyond yourself, and so you have courage, and you have dignity, and you have calmness in the face of terror, and awe, and the pretty girl holds your hand, and you contain her, and this book, and me writing it, and I too contain you, who may not yet even be born, you inside me inside you, though not in a creepy way, and so may you, may I, may we, so may we all of us confront the end."
From How To Get Filthy Rich In Rising Asia by Mohsin Hamid
See what he did there?! About confronting the end?! Brilliant.

". . . and then he asked me would I yes to say yes my mountain flower and first I put my arms around him yes and drew him down to me so he could feel my breasts all perfume yes and his heart was going like mad and yes I said yes I will Yes."
From Ulysses by James Joyce
The above is only a portion (we wouldn't be able to fit all of it in this article), but we couldn't NOT include one of the longest last sentences in literature. The last chapter of Ulysses is Molly Bloom's stream of consciousness, and it's simply amazing.

Friday, February 7, 2014

Virtual Blog Tour

Follow my blog tour if you are interested to learn more about me as an author and my book Shadows of Damascus. Leave a comment to get a chance to win a $50 Amazon/BN gift card.




Thursday, January 30, 2014

Shadows of Damascus on USA Today

I'm excited to let you know that Shadows of Damascus was featured on USA Today HEA Site on 1/27/2014. Here's the link if you want to check it out, and scroll down to the Romantic Suspense list. Nothing Sweeter than newer contemporary romances USA Today


Wednesday, January 29, 2014

Making Generalizations

I first published this post on 10/19/2012.  Since that day, a development happened linked to that specific incident in the post, and I thought to share it now.

So many times, I wished I could turn back the clock and revisit a situation I didn’t feel comfortable with, armed with more courage and just the right “come backs.” This was one of those situations. Once you read it, you will most likely figure out why I’m doing this.

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When I was a teenager   just a few years back   I was hooked on a French television show that keeps popping in my head every now and then. Each episode showed M’sieur BuĆhar, a man in his forties, having to endure the presence of annoying characters in everyday situations. He consistently handled stressful scenarios by imagining ways to “off” the annoying person in front of him, a defense mechanism that almost everyone I know uses at some point in their lives. I know I have, many times. My favorite method? Instantaneous combustion, visualizing the offending person in front of me suddenly burst into flames, and vanishing from my personal space.

M’sieur BuĆhar blew up his boss, drowned his mother-in-law, shaved his wife’s head, stuck a gun in the mouth of the salesman who sold him a crappy car, slit the throat of a boring monotonous lecturer, knocked out a policeman before he issued him a traffic ticket. You get the point? He did that all in his head, with a smile on his face. Sometimes, when I have to suffer a situation beyond my control, I close my eyes, summon M’sieur BuĆhar behind my eyelids and let my imagination run wild.

A few days ago, I didn’t just imagine M’sieur BuĆhar; I wanted to be M’sieur BuĆhar, extending a hand to repeatedly slap the extremely pompous person talking to me. Speaking condescendingly, making assumptions about my life without asking a single question first, judging my thought process before hearing the reasons behind it, brushing away any comment I was able to articulate as unimportant. Simply, insulting. I could have spit out something to put her in her place, or simply walked away after giving her a “drop dead” kind-of-look. But I couldn’t. This person held something in her hands. I needed it back, unscathed, untarnished, and pure. A project, my dream project. So I pasted a smile on my face, nodded my head like the patient person I was trying to be, looked her straight in the eye and called M’sieur BuĆhar to the conference room.

He stormed in, kneeled behind her back and fumbled with something at the foot of her chair. Gradually, this woman started dropping inch-by-inch until only her neck and head remained visible above the table surface. She kept talking, and I found myself looking down at her. M’sieur BuĆhar’s face popped from behind, wiggled his eyebrows at me, and then left the room. The meeting was over, I got back what I needed, and left.

Do you have a M’sieur BuĆhar to come to your rescue? I bet everyone does.

You probably figured out the dream project I needed back was the manuscript to my book, Shadows of Damascus, and the woman I had an interview with was a literary agent I pitched to in a writers conference. I was naive, inexperienced, and thought I had a good book prospect in my hands. I also thought that decent agents would most likely tear my work apart (notice the stress on the word work) to point out why they are rejecting it. I did not expect the verbal attack on my person from someone I have never met before, though I’ve been subjected to many forms of it in my line of work with domestic abuse victims. But this was a professional person, in a professional setting.

That meeting stayed with me for a long, long time. I talked about it to fellow authors, and found almost every one of them had a similar demeaning experience. It didn’t help alleviate the sting much. No one should have that kind of power over me. Over the years, I have experienced racial discrimination, religious intolerance, criminal hatred from abusers for advocating on behalf of my clients, harassed for being an outspoken woman, and on occasion, shut out from certain circles for not being outspoken enough. By far, my experiences are not unique; too many have been subjected to worse. But this was the first time a complete stranger found a way to shake my core the way this agent did.

Ironically, those same experiences taught me how to persevere, how to pick up the crumbles of my pride and move forward again. And I charged! Not running away from what happened, but running toward my goal. Shadows of Damascus is a published book now (by Soul Mate Publishing, NY).

If anyone tells me I should be thankful to that agent for giving me a kick, I will scream. I wasn’t sitting on my bum, twiddling my fingers and needed for her to kick me into action. I was working hard, very, very hard on getting my manuscript into the right hands. What gave me the strongest boost was my strong relationship with the people who believed in me: my family, my editor at SMP, and fellow writers. My writers’ community has the most generous and genuine professional people I have ever met. They help each other, exchange contacts and opportunities, and channel information with ease and without strings attached or expectations. I don’t think there is a professional atmosphere that lacks personal competitiveness, at least not in most cultures. But I found that writers in general want to see each other succeed. Perhaps they were all kicked down at one point in their careers, and the memory is just too profound to brush aside, keeping them grounded and helpful. I certainly hope I get the chance to help another writer reach his or her goal someday.

For full disclosure, I belong to the Houston writers Guild . I met wonderful, supportive, and talented people there. I also had the opportunity to get to know fellow authors on line all over the world, including Soul Mate Publishing Authors. Making generalizations is something I try to avoid, but I will make an exception on this one. Every writer, author, and poet I met has been a tremendous asset to my professional and personal life. And for that, I am thankful.



Wednesday, January 22, 2014

Social Media Indigestion

So I established a Facebook Author page facebook.com/LilasTahaAuthor
and a Facebook book page facebook.com/pages/Shadows.of.Damascus
and an Author profile on Amazon Amazon Author
and a Goodreads author profile goodreads.com/Lilas_Taha
in addition to my Twitter account @LilasTaha
and LinkedIn account linkedin.com/lilastaha
and my website lilastaha.com
Oh! And this blog site.

Now, I am all exhausted. All I want is to write!

When I was a student, I coauthored a paper titled "Starving at the Banquet" with my mentor professor Barrette Caldwell in January 1993  publication  Interpersonal Computing & Technology Journal. The scope of the paper was mainly technical in the field of Safety Engineering, but it touched on the social effects of electronic media presence. At the time, the social media explosion had not happened yet. No Facebook, LinkedIn, Twitter, or any of the many venues that keep us glued to our computers and smartphones or tablets. Our research discussed phone calls, emails, typed notes, and face-to-face interactions in the work place. I will not delve into the methodology and findings, but I can tell you the ultimate conclusion when it comes to the best way of conveying vital information content: Face-to-face meetings.

I wonder if this still holds true today, if we take in the "new" forms of communication in the electronic field. I need to do some "googling" as there must be lots of research done on this matter once I have some down time.

From my experience so far, from the minute I landed the publishing contract to launching the book, to this very morning, I have not stopped spinning my wheels on the social media engines. I'm exhausted, and really, all I want to do is finish my second book and find an agent for it.


Sunday, January 19, 2014

Breaking Boundaries

I'm honored to have been invited by the American Civil Liberties Union to be their guest of honor at the Planned Parenthood luncheon gala on January 22. Shadows of Damascus is grabbing attention.